How old are you?

Terribly Write

Reading this, I thought the writer was perhaps a 10-year-old, and not a professional writer for yahoo.com:

fp which is when

Since when does “which is when” apply to a medical condition? I guess the writer didn’t know that when applies to time, except when you were in third grade, when you used it liberally to apply to just about anything. Maybe when the writer graduates from high school he or she will think to write:

hypoxia, which is a deficiency of oxygen in the brain

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